This book makes inventing lessons easy on teachers because it was clearly designed by the author to excite children's imaginations. The book is a wellspring of stimulating creative writing "starters." The most obvious way we can use this book is to suggest that students do as Peter Wenders's children did (as described in Van Allsburg's introductory letter) and simply use the pictures and captions to write or tell their own stories. There are endless variations on this theme: children could be asked to choose one picture and write about it in one way, and then to write a completely different story based on the same picture. Each child could choose a different picture to write about and then one could read to the others and ask the listeners to link the stories with the pictures that inspired them. Much younger children who are not yet experienced writers would have a wonderful time sitting in a circle and creating a story out loud about one of the pictures, with each child adding a detail to the one before. Teachers can record the stories that younger children invent about these pictures and read them out loud later. Children of all ages can act out the stories they invent to go along with the pictures. More experienced writers will enjoy a discussion about why exactly it is that these images and ideas are so stimulating to readers. What interests us about the scenarios Van Allsburg sets up? How can we as writers bring the same kind of intrigue into our own stories? We can discuss with our students how The Mysteries of Harris Burdick is like a list of exciting writing ideas. This provides us with the opportunity to tell students that real writers actually do thiskeep a notebook full of ideas for stories, poems, or books. In addition to encouraging children to write stories inspired by Van Allsburg's writing, we can encourage them to be inspired by an aspect of his process as well: we can teach students to invent their own lists of writing ideas, with pictures to go along, if they like. The options are endlesschildren can trade lists and write stories based on one another's ideas, or they can choose one of their own ideas to develop into a story. A fun way to bring older and younger students together might be for a class of older students to collaborate on creating a "mysteries" book of their own, and then to present it to a lower-grade class and ask for help inventing stories to go with the scenarios.
What You'll Need:
- A copy of The Mysteries of Harris Burdick
- Chart paper or an overhead projector
- Markers/overhead pens
- If possible, one small spiral-bound notebook for each child (otherwise, loose-leaf paper works fine)
Because the book doesn't contain much text and can be read aloud relatively quickly, it is possible to present this lesson to your students without having introduced them to the book on a previous occasion. However, because the book presents so many opportunities for rich discussion, you may want to spend some time in conversation about it (using the guiding questions above as a place to start, if you wish) before presenting the lesson. While the lesson works best when presented in the context of a fiction-writing unit, it can be presented independently as well.
After reading The Mysteries of Harris Burdick
to your students, engage them in a brief discussion of the book's context. Draw their attention to the fact that the book is meant to function almost as a sourcebook for writing ideas. Tell them that many writers create their own lists of ideas to help them begin stories. Sometimes writers carry notebooks around and write down ideas when they come to them, so that when they sit down to write, they have many ideas to choose from. Tell your students that in addition to using The Mysteries of Harris Burdick
to inspire stories they write, they can use the concept the book presents to create lists of their own writing ideas. They will be using either the small notebooks you provide or loose-leaf paper.
In The Mysteries of Harris Burdick
, Chris Van Allsburg creates an exciting list of story ideas that make it almost impossible for us not to want to finish the stories on our own. He probably did not come up with all those ideas at once. He may have kept a list that grew gradually.
Perhaps he even carried a notebook with him to write down ideas as they occurred to him. (The idea for Van Allsburg's book The Polar Express
began as an image he had in his mind of a train pulling up in front of a boy's house!) Tell your students that they will be beginning their own lists of ideas in the small notebooks you provide.
Model for your students either on the overhead or on chart paper how you might go about beginning a list of story ideas. "I might ask myself, 'What ideas have been bouncing around in my head lately that I haven't had a chance to write?'" you may say thinking aloud so your students can observe the process you are going through. Write a couple of ideas, modeling how you don't necessarily need to write complete sentences when you are making notes to yourself. "A boy finds magic shoes in his grandmother's attic they make it so he can jump over trees." "A little girl's collection of plastic farm animals comes to life after midnight." Use your own story-starter ideas to inspire your students to think creatively when recording their own ideas.
Tell your students that although they will be able to carry their little notebooks around with them so that they can record ideas when they occur to them, today's writing time will focus on getting a good list started. Tell them to write as many story ideas as they can during writing time. If they get stuck, they can always take a look at The Mysteries of Harris Burdick
to inspire them. Explain to them that a follow-up lesson will focus on how they can use their lists of ideas to start their own stories.
During writing time, your students will be writing lists instead of stories, so they may appear to be less focused than usual. You may want to remind them that thinking is a big part of this process, so they do not necessarily need to be writing the entire timebut keeping the room quiet will help them in getting a good start on their ideas. As they write, confer with students individually.
Share the work of several students who have made headway in listing ideas they will use for stories later on. Choose students who have really stretched their imaginationsthe more unique and creative ideas students are exposed to, the easier it will be for them to stretch their own minds as well.
Adapting This Lesson for Use with Less Experienced Writers:
Expanding This Lesson:
- Instead of having each student use an individual notebook, create a class list of ideas on chart paper to which students can refer. Instead of asking them to write stories based on ideas the class comes up with, you may want to have very young children tell the stories out loud. You can take dictation, and the students can illustrate their storiesor you can simply leave them as oral storytelling experiences.
- Have the children use ideas they have written in their notebooks to write stories of their own. When they are finished, ask them to illustrate what they have written.
- Ask your students to carry their notebooks around for a week and write down ideas when they feel inspired. Have them share their ideas with one another. Discuss how it felt to catch an idea right awaydid they find that they began having more ideas? Or remembering more ideas?
- Sometimes dreams contain excellent story ideas. Invite your students to record ideas in their notebooks that come to them in dreams.
Collective Storytelling Inspired by The Mysteries of Harris Burdick: A Lower-grade Reading Lesson
What You'll Need:
- A copy of The Mysteries of Harris Burdick
- Chart paper and markers
- A space where all of your students can sit comfortably in a circle
- A "talking stick" or some other object for students to hold when it is their turn to speak
It is helpful if students have already read and discussed The Mysteries of Harris Burdick
. It is also helpful if they have had experience telling stories as a class before, although this is not necessary. Sitting in a circle and telling stories in which each child builds on what the previous one says is an excellent way to develop sequencing skills as well as story sense. In addition to being an altogether enjoyable process, group storytelling is an invaluable way to encourage speaking in front of a group and develop listening skills.
As a class, choose a page from The Mysteries of Harris Burdick
to "story-tell." Look hard at the picture together and ask the children to notice as many details as possible. For purposes of explanation, let's use "Archie Smith, Boy Wonder" here.
Arrange your students in a circle. Make certain that each student can see all the other students. Explain that you will be starting the story and that each child will be adding to it, one after another around the circle. Explain that only the person who is holding the magic "talking stick" (this can be simply a small stick or any other object you choose to indicate the speaker) is able to speak. The rest of the class should be listening hard so that when their turns come, they know what has happened so far in the story and will be able to add a piece that makes sense.
This activity works best when the story is started in a clear, strong way, so it is usually a good idea for you to do this yourself. Sit in the circle with your students and hold your talking stick. You may begin with something like, "Once upon a time there was a boy named Archie Smith. He seemed like a regular boy on the outside, but after his seventh birthday, strange things started to happen to him."
Then pass the stick to the child next to you and ask him or her to continue the story. The tendency of small children is to make wild leaps; we want to encourage the wild leaps of imagination, but at the same time, it is important to teach students how to fit their thinking with the previous idea.
You may want to intervene at some points if children add a thought to the story that is totally unrelated to what you've been talking about. This is to be expected. Simply remind students of what was said previously and encourage them to add only the next step. You may want to stop two or three times and recount what has happened so far; this not only models retelling but will strengthen their sense of the story as it builds and make it easier for them to add something that makes sense.
You will also need to control the tendency many young children have to end stories as soon as possibleit is tricky to slow down and go step by step! Remind them often that only the last person can end the story, so that every student's voice is heard. If they try to end it"And then he woke up, the end!"you will want to encourage them to think again and add a detail that stretches the story even further.
After you have finished the story (and don't worry if it is not completely cohesive and brilliantstorytelling in this fashion takes a lot of practice!), debrief with your students. What was hard for them? What was easy? What was fun? Reinforce the idea that they have created a brand-new story together as a community, starting with only a tiny seed of an idea presented by Chris Van Allsburg. Tell them that you will be practicing this activity again, using the same story idea.
Adapting This Lesson for Use with More Experienced Readers:
Expanding This Lesson:
- Have students write their own versions of the story you told as a class.
- After having practiced this activity as a class, divide your students into groups of four or five and have them choose a different idea from the book to tell as a small group. Have groups present their stories to one another.
- After having practiced the story several times, invite another class to come and listen.
- Write the words of the story into a book that the students can illustrate.
- Keep the book in a special place in your classroom library.
- Try the same process with another story idea from The Mysteries of Harris Burdick.
- Try the same process using an idea that comes from an experience your class shared together (in real life).
- Try writing a letter directly to your readers, just as Chris Van Allsburg does to set up The Mysteries of Harris Burdick.
- Try writing a story about one of the pictures, with the idea that you want to convey one particular emotion. Next, using the same picture, write the story with a completely different emotion in mind.
- Write new captions to go with the illustrations. How do the new captions change your interpretation of the pictures?
- Write an answer to the mystery of Harris Burdick himself.